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Imperial Palace, Megalith, Concentration Camps, Industrial Farms, Black Hole Power Generator, Tectonic Instability, High Axial Tilt, Very Slow Rotation and Tidally Locked Rotation all have newly introduced spelling or grammatical errors, or are worded much more awkwardly than before. There are also a few other descriptions that have retained grammatical errors or missing words, but those aren't really your fault...

Genome bank contains a sentence in the fluff which explains vaguely what the building does, and seems out of place now that its effect is fully described above.

I don't know if this is due to your edit or eleazar's, but many of the descriptions don't flow as well if the order of the meat and the fluff is simply reversed; for instance, starting the Space Elevator description with "The supply meter of the planet which contains this building is tripled" doesn't sound very good - much better is something like "Triples Supply on the planet on which it is built." Gaia Transformation is another building with this problem, probably among others, and in the case of Solar Orbital Generator, the description barely makes sense anymore. (Also, you didn't capitalize "supply" in this description - was that deliberate? There are also many other cases of this.)

Collective Thought Network says:

"Increases... research on Planets with the Research focus by one and a half."

And lastly, the sole purpose of Construction in the game at the moment is to increase resource supply length. This is why all the things that affect construction say (or rather, said) "Increases/decreases max resource supply range by X."

What does "BLD_PLANET_CLOAK" do exactly? The meat talks about a "stealth-focus" but I dont think we have one?

Some species have a stealth focus available on planets that have that building....

Im human and would love the idea to "hide" a planet...right now the best i can do is get my planet stealth meters to 5...iv researched EVERYTHING and they wont go higher then 5...

It looks like the values of the stealth bonuses given by EM Damper, Absorption Field, Dimensional Cloak, and Phasing Cloak were changed to 5, 10, 15 and 5 respectively, without the stringtable being altered.

As I mentioned before, you can turn on auto-generated effects descriptions in the options menu under UI to check the actual effects of a tech.

I don't know if this is due to your edit or eleazar's, but many of the descriptions don't flow as well if the order of the meat and the fluff is simply reversed; for instance, starting the Space Elevator description with "The supply meter of the planet which contains this building is tripled" doesn't sound very good - much better is something like "Triples Supply on the planet on which it is built." Gaia Transformation is another building with this problem, probably among others, and in the case of Solar Orbital Generator, the description barely makes sense anymore. (Also, you didn't capitalize "supply" in this description - was that deliberate? There are also many other cases of this.)

....so I don't feel like I spent 5 hours just making things worse ...

But it doesn't do anything in Buildings.txt?

So your saying it only applies to certain species?

How about letting everyone research the techs and the building and be allowed to build it? Then it would unlock the "Stealth Focus" for the planet that has that building so all species can utilize that amazing technology? Im human and would love the idea to "hide" a planet...right now the best i can do is get my planet stealth meters to 5...iv researched EVERYTHING and they wont go higher then 5...

...and simplified some of the descriptions. (specifcying "Target Health" insted of just "Health" seems to be extra words that are implied I think).

....Depending on how it is supposed to work the "meat" of an effect sometimes appears in different .txt files....

"Maximum" seems to describe it better then "Target" for new players. I also think we should capitalize anything that is a meter and maybe put it in bold.

Unless Target behaves in a way that justifies its use over Maximum, we should go with the latter imo.

There are both target meter and maximum meters, and they have one major difference, which is that maximum meters are a maximum allowed value for the associated current meter, whereas target meter are the value towards which the associated current meter moves, but is not a limit on what values the current meter can have. One or the other are used in different situations (eg. population has a target value, but ship structure has a max value).

Then why don't we just call them "Current" and "Maximum"?

Call what that? I don't understand your question, but I think that's because your question is based on you not understanding what I wrote.There's no simple way around this. If everything that every building does is in the buildings file, and there's some interactions between species and buildings, then that would mean that not all the things that a species does can be in the species file.

As it works now, all the focii that a species can have are part of the species definition. If you want to move "Add a Focus" to buildings, then you or someone else would later complain that not all the focii that a species can have are in one place and that it's hard to track down where all the possible focii are coming from.

There are also some internal implementation issues that make it preferable to define what focii are available in the species definition, so that's where they are.

I meant instead of calling them "Target" meters (Target Health, Target Industry) why dont we call them "Current" meters (Current Health, Current Industry).

Could you just quote the part of a post you're replying to, rather than the whole thing?

Because "current" doesn't describe the function of a "target" meter, and there are already "current" meters which are what actually track the state of things in game (eg. how much shields a ship has at the moment) and which are limited or which move towards the target or max value (eg. the maximum shields a ship can have).