Geoff the Medio wrote:
That looks awesome pd. Especially the colouration and shading / pseudometallic texture of the letters, and the subtle glow of the O.
Man that looks sweet.
Geoff the Medio wrote:
Have either of you tried having the tips of the O crescent extend into the top left quadrant? Just the sharp endy bits... nothing big.
I second this. It needs to look like a full O.
Geoff the Medio wrote:
Also, the F is a little... undersized? But the N is a little big looking... I wonder if the N could be compressed slightly horizontally, and the F enlarged slightly? Normally it's written FreeOrion or Freeorion, with the F capitalized.
Keep all the letters the same height and the width. I would like a balanced look, eg freeOrion. Agree that N should have width decreased and F should have width increased. When I say freeOrion I would still want to kepp the 'free' and the 'rion' as capitals, jsut the O must be bigger, like it is now.
Geoff the Medio wrote:
Also also, have you considered having a serrated inner edge on the O? Something rather rough and irregular... like it was drawn with paintbrush strokes...
I don't like this idea. Are you saying that the black circle in the middle of the O should be more greyish and blured (like brush strokes). I guess you mean just making the inner edges softer. See it looks like a circlular shadow covering the moon, though the shadow should appear softer around the endges of the shadow, that would be ok to an extent.